2015년 6월 6일 토요일

Shelf project #2 (Healing camp) - feed back script

1: 14  I have 4 grades ⟶ I'm senior


1: 25  Maybe everyone will be problem ⟶ I think everyone have problem about this


1: 40  I don't know how to go ⟶ Even I'm not sure why I should go abroad


13: 20  I'm not late ⟶ I'm not the one who enter a company at age 28 so I think I don't think I'm late

13: 28  I think him make a plan ⟶ I think he has a clear plan


21: 54  This problem is, you have to advice for him ⟶ About this problem, you can give him a good advice

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